IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 - Holding Parties

 

Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money.  Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

Human beings are gregarious and thrive when socialising. The act of giving is often as pleasurable as receiving and hosting an opulent party as can be afforded makes an occasion extra special.  I think that it is beneficial for society and individuals to have occasions to look forward to, most people feel much happier when they are planning and looking forward to a special event.

 

Some cultures place a high value on social occasions such as weddings, birthdays and other milestones in life and it is tradition to invite as many guests as possible.  For them there is no doubt that no expense should be spared.  No-one can be left out without feeling offended.  We have seen in the lock-down of Covid-19 how many have been distressed by the banning of social gatherings, couples have not been able to hold weddings, and even funerals have been held without friends and relatives being able to comfort the bereaved.

 

Whether or not families can afford to spend a lot, there are people who will think of it as a waste of money, once the occasion is over there is no financial benefit or they may prefer to spend on holidays.  Some parties do not go to plan, or guests argue and the whole occasion is spoiled.  They may consider it preferable to spend the money on a new car or jewelry and have something which will last longer than a party.  However, memories last a lifetime.

 

To conclude, I think that society and individuals benefit from special events, they bring people together and the feelings of belonging and being included contribute towards the well-being of society as a whole.  Those little extras which may seem extravagant make the occasion special and more memorable. (291 words)

 

Introduction

Human beings are gregarious and thrive when socialising. The act of giving is often as pleasurable as receiving and hosting an opulent party as can be afforded makes an occasion extra special.  I think that it is beneficial for society and individuals to have occasions to look forward to, most people feel much happier when they are planning and looking forward to a special event. (65 words)

 

Body Paragraph 1

Some cultures place a high value on social occasions such as weddings, birthdays and other milestones in life and it is tradition to invite as many guests as possible.  For them there is no doubt that no expense should be spared.  No-one can be left out without feeling offended.  We have seen in the lock-down of Covid-19 how many have been distressed by the banning of social gatherings, couples have not been able to hold weddings, and even funerals have been held without friends and relatives being able to comfort the bereaved. (92 words)

 

Body Paragraph 2

Whether or not families can afford to spend a lot, there are people who will think of it as a waste of money, once the occasion is over there is no financial benefit or they may prefer to spend on holidays.  Some parties do not go to plan, or guests argue and the whole occasion is spoiled.  They may consider it preferable to spend the money on a new car or jewelry and have something which will last longer than a party.  However, memories last a lifetime. (87 words)

 

Conclusion

To conclude, I think that society and individuals benefit from special events, they bring people together and the feelings of belonging and being included contribute towards the well-being of society as a whole.  Those little extras which may seem extravagant make the occasion special and more memorable. (47 words)